I don't mean to undermine your drawing talents at all, but this flash shows you that something doesn't have to be greatly drawn to be an amazing flash. Although the animation was a little choppy, and the drawings a little simplistic, this flash was amazingly well put together, funny, and interesting. I fucking LOVED the "~8x.38" part. I laughed so hard at that part, as well as other scenes.
In short, great job.
You appreciated my flash exactly what I meant it for, as well as many others, thanks Jamie.
I was unaware that off-centered animated .gifs ripped from photobucket counted as a flash.
Just like my Marge dress up game, this was a practice flash. I didn't know about the Alphas when I submitted this.
And, since it(somehow)passed judgement, I guess it does count as a Flash.
Very humorous. I loved the ending with MissingNo. Good, fluent sprite animation, but I noticed during some transitions a smaller version of the map would flash for some reason, probably a mistake with v-cam or something :/.
Overall a solid, funny video that I favorited.
Yes, it was a v-cam glitch and it annoys the hell out of me. I know how to fix it now, though, so my future flashes won't have it. :)
Well, I really liked the poem, and the artwork was decent. However, it took me a while to think to hit tab on my keyboard to learn that I have to press the sun to get the movie to play :/. Fix it up with a better start button, and you'll be all set.
Overall, a nice short film with a good poem.
hey man. sorry about the whole play button deliema. i was rushing (check the commentary). But im glad you liked it. i think it woulda turned out better if i hadnt been rushed. oh well. thanks for the review
Good artwork and decent dialogue made this a winner. However, I felt like it was a little long for a short regarding this subject, especially the bedroom scene. But overall, I liked it.
Heh, I get ya.
I'll keep that in mind, thanks
I actually enjoyed this. I liked the artwork. The music was confusing, I've heard some songs to wear pants to, but I've never heard that one. But for some reason it made me chuckle a little.
Overall good artwork and I'm sure you will produce some more good stuff!
I thought this was a change of pace for the portal! I loved the message you tried to convey through this unique metaphor of hiding your emotions behind a mask. I really liked it, I'm happy you got a good grade.
However, since this is an animation site, I suppose I have to critique it based on how well it was animated as well. I wasn't a fan of the artwork, I'm sorry. I still really appreciate the message you tried to put this message across.
Well, the artwork was a little lacking of course, but I found it kind of charming half-way through. I liked the "silent story", or a story told with no words. A dying art form! I'd like to see some more animations from you like this, but maybe with better doodles and possibly some faint music in the background.
Overall, I thought this was a very charming little story, and with more practice you could make some great work.
Well, your artwork was ok. You did a decent job with syncing. The problems I had with this short was that I felt it was actually too short to be a "short". also I don't find mindless violence to be funny, nor do I think many people do. So it was a little lacking in the funny department.
However, like I said. Your artwork is fine. I'm sure if you put a little more effort into animations they'd be fine!
I can understand if it's not your cup of comedy tea, however I don't feel it's shortcomings can be fairly summarized as a "lack of effort". Hopefully I'll produce something soon that's more to your liking and thanks for the fair review and as I say quite often, hope my cartoons and your opinion of them will improve in the near future.
A grand display of the SE artform!
I very much enjoyed this grand SE, Slash. The humor was top notch! I can't wait to see more!
I take some lettuce, tomato, cucumber, egg, bacon bits, croutons, and salad dressing, and then I put the bowl in my bed and then I slam my erect penis into it while staring at a poster of Salad Fingers.
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